Exercise: Module 2 The Writing Process กระบวนการเขียน

However, now more married women and teenagers are get HIV.
1. However, now more married women and teenagers are getting HIV.
2. Although now more married women and teenagers are getting HIV.
3. Although now more married women and teenagers are get HIV.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
HIV spread to family such as father, mother, and newborn baby.
1. HIV spreads to family such as father, mother, and newborn baby.
2. HIV is spreading to family such as father, mother, and newborn baby.
3. HIV spread to family members, such as fathers, mothers, and newborn babies.
4. HIV is spreading to family members, such as fathers, mothers, and newborn babies.
The amount of HIV infection in Thailand increase.
1. The amount of the HIV infection in the Thailand increase.
2. The amount of HIV infection in Thailand increase.
3. The amount of HIV infection in Thailand is increasing.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
Main reason HIV spread to family is society not want to talk about sex.
1. The main reason HIV is spreading to families is that society does not want to talk about sex.
2. The main reason HIV spreads to families is society not want to talk about sex.
3. The main reason HIV spreads to families is society not want to talk about sex.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
Thai society have the sex freedom and use the drug.
1. Thai society has the sex freedom and use the drug.
2. Thai society has free sex and drug use.
3. Thai society has sexual freedom and drug abuse.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
It is looked that knowledge and information of sex will make Thai society become the West
society.
1. It was looking at that knowledge and information about sex will make Thai society
  knowledge the Western society.
2. It is seeing knowledge and information about sex will make Thai society become more like
  Western society.
3. It is perceived that knowledge and information about sex will make Thai society become more Western society.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
They are the important condition in spreading of HIV.
1. They are the important condition in the spread of HIV.
2. They are the important factors in the spread of HIV.
3. They are the important condition in HIV spread.
4. They are the important factor in HIV spread.
It goes in opposite direction with policy to promote Thai cultural.
1. It goes in the opposite direction of the policy to promote Thai cultural.
2. It goes in the opposite direction of the policy to promote Thai culture.
3. It directionally opposes Thai’s culture promotion policy.
4. It is opposed to the directions to promote Thai culture.
Drugs such as heroin some Thai people use syringe to put drug into veins but don’t clean
syringe and share with friend.
1. Drugs such as heroin some Thai people use syringes to inject it into their veins, but they don’t clean the syringes and they share them with friends.
2. Some Thai people use syringes to inject drugs such as heroin into their veins, but they don’t
  clean the syringes and they share them with friends.
3. Some Thai people use heroin to inject their veins, but they don’t clean the syringes or share them with friends.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
But now the society make change and cannot escape reality about sex.
1. But now society is changing and cannot escape the reality of sexual.
2. However, now society is changing and cannot escape the reality of sex.
3. However, now society makes change and cannot escape sexual reality.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.
In beginning HIV common in prostitutes and drug users.
1. In beginning, HIV common in prostitutes and drug users.
2. In the beginning, HIV common in prostitutes and drug users.
3. In the beginning, HIV was common in prostitutes and drug users.
4. In the beginning, HIV are common in prostitutes and drug users.
Now Thai people have HIV in body about 700,000-800,000 people.
1. Now have about 700,000-800,000 Thai people HIV in body.
2. There are now about 700,000-800,000 Thai people with HIV.
3. About 700,000-800,000 Thai people now has HIV.
4. The original sentence is already grammatical.

Exercise: Module 2 The Writing Process กระบวนการเขียน

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Exercise:
Module 2

The Writing Process
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